go something like this.
Overall, it looks like a sensible and comprehensive list. The devil will be in the implementation and policing. Obviously AI outfits signing up voluntarily to these commitments is welcome. But the real test will be when—and it will happen—there's conflict between such commitments and commercial imperatives.
There are plenty more concerns, besides. Just how open are AI companies going to be about their valuable IP? Won't AI companies ultimately experience the same commercial impetus to horde any information that might give them a competitive advantage? Surely AI companies focus on revenue-generating applications over pursuing the greater good? Don't they owe that to their shareholders? And so on.